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John Mistretta's avatar

This was great. Your writing chops are awesome. The beginning of the piece reminded me of “Tales of the Black Freighter” from Watchmen, which has always blown me away and is writing that I consider top tier (I’m specifically talking about the black freighter parts). You’re right there with it!

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Laggy's avatar

Ooooh this is good

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The Mighty Humanzee's avatar

Awesome - Edgar Rice Burroughs meets the Priests, of the Temples, of Syrinx. I love this.

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Dave Wise (Neoteric Wood Art)'s avatar

WOW! You are such a gifted writer!

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Dave Wise (Neoteric Wood Art)'s avatar

So short, I want more! xD Really looking forward to part 2. Thank YOU for the wonderful story.

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